"Transmission"

Submitted by Bradley Hislop on Mon, 2009-06-22 05:28
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TRANSMIT INFO: to me... bits, bytes.. this bites... virtual teeth
 
RECEIVE INFO: compacted places of fluff.. brushed off words.my stance is balanced. strong core. leaking fluid. slowly...
 
TRANSMIT INFO: slide your touch along a smooth granite wall. twinkle is the way of this stone. crystal smock.
 
RECEIVE INFO: perhaps my miss will confound you. perhaps confounding will be missed.
 
TRANSMIT INFO:how can blood be sent through air?
 
RECEIVE INFO:?...
 
Now is when the truth is transparent.
Choose what you will.
Your mind cannot change the wind which surrounds you.
And the dust thrown stings deeply.

 

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by 4 dwn file (not verified) - 2009-12-14 03:13

the amateur does it for

the amateur does it for love. The professional does it for money. For hire, like a mercenary.
by Bradley Hislop - 2009-06-24 04:03

Fortunately I am a true

Fortunately I am a true amateur

by Jaia Papitz - 2009-06-24 10:04

I know you are

and I'm trying, fighting to maintain the same rail.

by Jaia Papitz - 2009-06-23 03:41

true

the amateur does it for love. The professional does it for money. For hire, like a mercenary.

by joust (not verified) - 2009-06-22 06:51

great 'transmission'

great stuff, bgh - have you published something? in print? this iExile.com is my new favorite... you guys are great
by Bradley Hislop - 2009-06-22 23:39

That is a very kind thing to

That is a very kind thing to say. Thank you. Unfortunately I am a true amateur. 

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